IELTS Writing Task-2(Opinion Essay)

We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages!

To what extent do you agree?

In today’s world, the intervention of technology in our lives is drastically increased. Although, there are certain benefits associated with the computer world, I strongly believe that there are serious issues caused to the security of the valuable and sensitive information.

With the advent of the internet, knowledge sharing and accessing the information has become effortless. Subsequently, it has become feasible to know the happenings around the world. Also, the demand for online shopping is increasing enormously rather than purchasing in the shops directly. Furthermore, online social networking sites like Facebook has brought the different countries together whereas before the development of the technology, people had rarely a chance to meet each other.

On the other hand, there is no safety of the information which in turn poses a huge threat to the community and the individuals. Especially, the advertisements posted in the websites is a key factor to steal our data…